The Cult of Pertty

Category: Tailgate Musings (Page 4 of 4)

Random thoughts about the poetry I write, how I write it, and why I write it.

Guy Clark and Cold Dog Soup

Some of you may be familiar with Guy Clark’s Cold Dog Soup and his reference to “hillbilly haiku.”

Townes Van Zandt standin’ at the bar
Skinnin’ a Hollywood movie star
Can’t remember where he parked his car
Or to whom he lost the keys
Full of angst and hillbilly haiku
What’s a poor Ft. Worth boy to do
Go on rhyme somethin’ for em’ man
Show him how you really feel

I didn’t learn of this excellent song until several years after I had begun writing Hillbilly Haiku. I have dated some of my HH back to the year 2001. I had the idea at least a year before that, so I’ll call it circa the year 2000 for my beginning. Naturally, I wondered if I was first to use the term, so I looked up the detail of Clark’s song. It seems Clark’s album hit the streets in 1999. One would assume Clark and his co-writer, Mark Sanders, had thought of the term at least a year before they wrote it and Clark recorded it. Therefore, I have to credit either Clark or Sanders with the original use of term.

The Haiku Feel of “Sounds of Summer” by Dierks Bentley

I love Dierks Bentley’s music. His Riser album is genius. I’ve worn a groove in the CD in my old pick-up.

With relation to this blog, I was struck by the song Sounds of Summer which was written by Zach Crowell, Matt Jenkins, and Adam Sanders. It has several lyrics that lend themselves to Haiku. For example, the first 3 lines are:

It’s a tractor firin’ up
Kids playin’ in a field
Four wheels gettin’ stuck

Those of you who love haiku will point out that the order and the syllable count is wrong, but just a little adjustment gives us this:

Kids play’n in a field
It’s a tractor firin’ up
Four wheels gettin’ stuck

That’s a pretty damn good Hillbilly Haiku in my humble opinion. Although, those 3 lines evoke Spring rather than Summer for me. You have nature, season, and a slight surprise. I wish I had written it.

There are lots of great lines in there; “Boots climbin’ barbwire”, “the dust in the air”, and “tin roof drippin’ rain.”

Genius. Thanks, Fellas

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